The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparison where necessary.

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparison where necessary.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparison where necessary.
The chart illustrates the expenditure of two countries which they are
France
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,
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apply
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and the
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Uk
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UK
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. On consumer gods in 2010, in five different
things
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consumer goods,
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such
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as cars, computers, books, perfume, and cameras. The measure unit is
pound
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pounds
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Overview, the
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Uk
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UK
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had
spend
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spent
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more money
in
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on
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most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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item
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items
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,
while
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France
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had the lead only in two
item
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items
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which
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, which
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is
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are
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computers and perfume
,
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. In
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in addition
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to
that
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that,
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it had
similar
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a similar
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number on cars, but
on the other
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hand
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hand,
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the
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Uk
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UK
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had
significant
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a significant
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differnce
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difference
on books and
camras respectivily
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cameras respectively
.
To begin
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with
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with,
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cars
the
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in the
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Uk
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UK
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was
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were
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excatly 450,00
pounds
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,
while
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France
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in France
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was off
bu
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by
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50,00
pounds
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, but in
computers
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computers,
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France
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take
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took
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the lead with
slight
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a slight
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amount
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amount,
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were
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where
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it was less than 400,000 , and the
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Uk
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UK
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was over 350,000
pounds
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.
Third
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The third
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one is
books
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books,
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were
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where
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the
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Uk
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UK
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had greater change here ,400,000 and 300,000 for
France
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.
Next
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perfume
were
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sales in
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France
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was
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were
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higher by almost 75,000
pounds
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( just 200,000 to
France
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and the
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Uk
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UK
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were less than 150,000).
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Finally
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Finally,
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cameras were the
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Uk
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UK
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had
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were
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huge
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hugely
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different
than
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in
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France
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, by
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by
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with
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350,000
pounds
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to 150,000
pounds
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respecivily
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respectively
.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words france, uk, pounds with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • consumer goods
  • categories
  • compare
  • significant differences
  • trends
  • patterns
  • spending habits
  • similarities
  • findings
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