The bar graph provides information about the proportion of Australian
men
and women in different Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
category
who did regular physical activity during 2010.
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categories
Overall
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it is clear that
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male
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the male
group
had the highest between 15 to 24.Use synonyms
However
, the percentage of other Linking Words
demale
groups was larger than that Correct your spelling
demographic
other
male groups.
First,the male Change preposition
of other
group
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range
from 15 to 24, it had the greatest porportage stood Replace the word
ranged
up
approximately 53 %.Change preposition
at
While
the Linking Words
females
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female
group
between 15 to 24 was lower than Use synonyms
male
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the male
.
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group.
Secondly
, the Linking Words
females
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female
group
range between 25 and 34 Use synonyms
slightly
larger than Punctuation problem
, slightly
similar
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the similar
age
male Use synonyms
group
.Use synonyms
In addition
, the percentage of Australian women between 35 and 44 was far higher than that, making up around 53 %.Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
men
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the men
group
reached around 40%,Use synonyms
it
was the least Correct pronoun usage
which
during
several Change preposition
among
age
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
group
.
Looking more closely at the chart, the proportion of Australian females aged 45 to 54 was the highest in the whole population, taking up 53.3 %.Fix the agreement mistake
groups
Moreover
, the Linking Words
men
category followed Use synonyms
miderately
, accounting for around 43 %.The percentage of Correct your spelling
moderately
men
aged between 55 and 64 doing regular physical activity was gradually higher than similar Use synonyms
age
categoryUse synonyms
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apply
men
, Use synonyms
it reached
45 %.Eventually, the proportion of 65 and over that women and Wrong verb form
reaching
men
had a similar trend, with approximately 46% Use synonyms
anf
47 % respectively.Correct your spelling
and