The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
The line graph shows the amount of fast food consumed in the UK between 1970 and 1990.
Overall
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,
Fish
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and
chips
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were the most eaten type of fast food, followed by Hamburgers and
then
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Pizza
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being the least liked. In 1970,
Pizza
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was the most eaten with just above 300 grams consumed,
whereas
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Fish
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and
chips
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had just below
a
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100 grams, and
Hamburger
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hamburgers
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with approximately 50 grams. The popularity of
Pizza
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started to decline slowly over the decade. The other 2 fast food taken saw a steady rise in consumption
at
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the period went on.
Pizza
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,
Fish
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and
chips
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had
thesame
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the same
amount of consumers in the 1980's just over 200. From there,
Fish
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and
chips
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saw a significant increase
reaching
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about 500
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while
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, while
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Pizza
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remained constant.
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, around
1985
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1985,
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Hamburger surpassed
Pizza
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, making it the least eaten
at the end
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of the period.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips, pizza with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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