You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Explain your situation, Say why you feel unsure about living in the city Ask some questions about life in the city.

Hey Harjit,

Its

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been a

while

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since we

catch-up

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. How are you? I am writing

this

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letter to tell you that I am being

offer

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offered

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a job

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your city, Edmonton

and

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, and

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I want to know

about

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more about this

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this

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more. Since I got an offer from a software company, which is really important for my career growth. They have told me to start from

the

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apply

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next month.

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I have read on the internet about the city, I still want to ensure before moving there. I have read that city transport is not that

much

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reliable, as you know I don't have

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a driver

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driver

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license,

this

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could be a problem for me.

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, when I was

seraching

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searching

for the accommodation, I found that houses are quite small and expensive

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If they are,

then

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dont

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don't

think

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apply

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moving there is

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good idea. I have a few questions for you:

does

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the transport system

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that

much

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bad?, and can you tell me about how's weather there throughout the year, especially in winter?

Also

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, is it possible to rent a large house without paying too much? Most

important

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importantly

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, is it a good idea

overall

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to move for

this

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growing opportunity? Warm regards, Amarpreet Singh.

amarbatth367

Oct 3, 2025

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organization

Check the flow of ideas. Try to put one main idea in each paragraph and connect them with simple linking words.

grammar

Fix spelling and grammar. Use contractions where natural (It's), and correct common errors.

content

Be clear when you ask questions. Use short, direct questions.

tone

Keep a warm tone, but be ready for a friend living in the city.

content

Close with a kind line that invites a reply.

tone

Warm and friendly tone that fits a letter to a friend.

content

Clear purpose of the letter

content

The letter asks questions to know more about life in the city

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

202 words

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