The chart shows the percentage of people in one country, by age group, who visited one or more museums in 2006, 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of people in one country, by age group, who visited one or more museums in 2006, 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the percentage of people in one country, by age group, who visited one or more museums in 2006, 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts
proportion
Correct article usage
the proportion
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of
population
Correct article usage
the population
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who visited at least
on
Use the right word
one
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meseum
Correct your spelling
museum
, by age group
in
Punctuation problem
, in
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a country in the
year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
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2006, 2011 and 2016.
Overall
Linking Words
, the younger age groups had more museum visits in 2016, and the older age group in 2006. Ages 45-55 visits to the museum remained the same in 2011 and 2016. In 2006, the younger
aged
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age
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group had about 25%

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Add more linking words.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • age group
  • visited
  • museum
  • year
  • increased
  • decreased
  • rose
  • fell
  • remained
  • unchanged
  • highest
  • lowest
  • overall
  • trend
  • significant
  • slight
  • rapid
  • slower
  • compare
  • contrast
  • across
  • by
  • for
  • in
  • out of
  • percent
  • gap
  • difference
  • peak
  • drop
  • stable
  • vary
  • uniform
  • notable
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