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, THE MAJORITY OF PEOPLE LEAVE THE UK FOR THE QUALITY OF LIFE. Check wording
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, THE SIGNIFICANT INDIVIDUALS CHOOSE TO STAY IN GREAT BRITAIN FOR FAMILY AND FRIENDS.
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BEHIND LEAVING THE UK, THE MAIN REASON IS QUALITY OF LIFE, WHICH IS THE HIGHEST PROPORTION IN THE FIRST SKECH. FOLLOWED BY FINANCIAL Use synonyms
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TWO PERCENTAGES ARE WEATHER AND FAMILY AND FRIENDS WITH 12% AND 9% RESPECTIVELY.
WITH REGARD TO WHY PEOPLE CHOOSE TO STAY IN THE UK, THE PEAKS WAS FOR FAMILY AND FRIENDS ,WHICH IS THE OPPOSITE OF THE FIRST TABLE.
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, 21% OF THEM FOR SOCIAL LIFE, FOLLOWED BY AN EQUAL PROPORTION FOR THE FINANCIAL Linking Words
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