Some people believe that it is useless
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who do not have an artistic talent study painting or drawing in classes at school.
, they should focus on other creative or practical courses that they have enough skills
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to improve them. Others hold the opposite view.
I agree that
should learn as many
as they
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, because it enhances their skills and knowledge. I
believe that they have the right to choose the
that they will study, by doing
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the child will enjoy studying and will work harder to be better.
On the one hand, making
study different courses is important. Nowadays, many schools teach
many courses on various topics
as languages, arts, and Physical Education. The purpose of these
is to let the student decide what he thinks is good
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him.
,
should take at least one course in
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to improve their imagination and
to see
field is fun or not. Many parents said that their kids developed hobbies
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school.
, learning practical
is as important as learning arts, as it
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gives the child the chance to improve solving
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, and it gives him a sense of challenge which is beneficial to him, since it teaches him
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difficulties and never
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up.
, when I was a
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I did
prefer studying science. I chose to work on
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to do some videos and posts;
,
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my communication skills and I can speak without hesitating.
In conclusion, I partially agree with the proposal that
should ignore
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subject and should move to other creative
, because in my opinion
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a few
restricts
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one field.