The pie charts below show the age of visitors from the UK to Spain in 1983 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows 5 types of age in terms of visitors from the UK to Spain in 1983 and 2003.

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, the group tourists' age experienced different trends in the time period.

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the percentage of old people visiting fell , young people rose. The graph shows that people around 35-54

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started to visit from 50 % in 1983, and it declined to 35 % in 2003. Middle-aged individuals decreased from 20% to 12 % between 1983 and 2003. The percentage of the community aged 55+

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grew the one in ten from 1983 to 2003. The lowest change showed the age group around 0-15

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, which increased 2% from 1983 to 2003 . The highest figure indicated youngsters between 16 and 24

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population

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of age

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who constituted 11% .

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, over the period, groups between 35-54 illustrated the greatest share who constituting a 15% difference. The lowest fraction showed 16-24

years

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, which was 11%.

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The pie charts below show the age of visitors from the UK to Spain in 1983 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that natural ability is necessary to excel at sports. Others believe that hard work and practice is more important. Discuss both views and add your opinion.

Using a mobile phone while driving is dangerous because it causes the driver to become the distracted. Therefore mobile phone use by driver should be made illegal everywhere. To what extend do you agree or disagree?