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The graph below shows the number of participants in different activities in a UK city from 2000 to 2020.

The graph below shows the number of participants in different activities in a UK city from 2000 to 2020.
The line chart illustrates the
population
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 of
people
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 who were involved in diverse events at a social
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 in Melbourne, Australia
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, over
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 the 20-year period.
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, the
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number
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 of
participants
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of
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in
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film
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the film
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 club remained the highest, and that of Amateur dramatics started deteriorating in 2005. The same year, Musical performances began to be held at
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center
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,
the
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and the
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 total
number
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 of
participants
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 increased gradually. From 2010 to 2020, the
population
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 of
people
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 who take part in table tennis surged dramatically and overtook that of Martial arts
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around 2014. The
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 of
participants
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 of
Film
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the Film
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 club fluctuated slightly around 65 and remained the highest,
while
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 that of Martial arts varied from 30 to 40. In 2005, the Musical performance
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was firstly
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firstly
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 added
into
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to
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 the list of activities held at
this
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center
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, and the
number
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 of
participants
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raised
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rose
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 moderately and ultimately reached around 14
people
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 in 2020. Both the
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population
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populations
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 of
people
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 who took part in Table tennis and Amateur dramatics experienced a significant change from 2000 to 2020. Amateur dramatics’ performer and watcher’s
number
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 increased marginally from 2000 to 2005 (from around 25 to 28) and dropped considerably to less than 10
people
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 from 2005 to 2020,
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 the activity with
lowest
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the lowest
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number
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 of
participants
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. In the same period, the
population
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 of Table tennis players and audience climbed from 15 to 20 from 2000 to 2010 and suddenly
rocked
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rose
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 to 50 within 10 years, just after that of
Film
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the Film
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 club.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, people, participants, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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