International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Are the problems that international travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own Knowledge or experience.

With the development of globalisation and
economy
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the economy
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, international travel has become a more and more
pupular
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popular
choice
by
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for
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lots of families.
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, some
people
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are arguing that there will be more disadvantages than benefits for developing international
tourism
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.
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,
this
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esaay
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essay
will investigate
on
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this
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statement from both sides, with my personal experience and perspectives. On one hand, it is evident that welcoming international
travellers
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can significantly boost
local
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the local
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economy, especially for countries or regions which highly rely on the
tourism
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industry
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.
For example
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,
Hong
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Kong
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, as one of the biggest modern cities in the world, has attracted a large number of
tourists
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around
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from around
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the world.
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the most significant
industry
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in
Hong
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Kong
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in
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is
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finance,
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tourism
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the tourism
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industry
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also
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plays an important role in
Hong
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Kong
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's economy.
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the data, since the number of international
travellers
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had dropped dramatically
due to
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the
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Covid-19
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COVID-19
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in the past few years, lots of workers in
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tourism
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the tourism
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industry
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were getting much lower pay and even lost their jobs. Based on
this
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situation,
Hong
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Kong
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's government had to
do
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implement many following policies to ensure their income and living quality, including filming
tourism
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advertisement
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advertisements
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,
lowwing
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lowering
down
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the visa application requirements and so on.
On the other hand
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,
however
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, international
travellers
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sometimes can bring
troubles
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trouble
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to the local citizens.
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,
Hong
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Kong
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people
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used to complain about international
tourists
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between 2014-2018.
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Due to
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the arrival
by
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of
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the
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large number of
travellers
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, the local traffic,
supermakets
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supermarkets
and restaurants were full of
people
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.
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, local citizens'
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quality was influenced negatively. From my experience, I once met a parade
of
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against international
tourists
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this
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year in Barcelona. The local
people
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were arguing the negative impact that
tourists
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bring: increasing
price
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the price
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level, traffic
jam
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jams
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, hygiene on the streets and so on. It seemed
like
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that the local
people
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did not welcome
travellers
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.
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, through the progress of my tour, things did not happen
through
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in
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this
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way. Barcelona has lots of attractive places that cost tickets, and there
were
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are
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many nice small restaurants. These places need
tourists
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as the local
people
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would not go there frequently.
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,
tourists
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would prefer
go
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to restaurants that are famous online, with
great
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a great
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location and beautiful decoration. These have different prices compared to the others that local
people
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usually go
.
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to.
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In conclusion, there is no doubt that welcoming international
tourists
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is
benefitial
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beneficial
to the local
enconomy
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economy
.
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, it is essential for the local government to implement
following
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the following
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strategies to take care
the
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of the
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life quality of local
people
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,
such
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as
control
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controlling
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the price level,
build
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building
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more roads,
construct
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constructing
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more facilities and so on.

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