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Given is a map of Hunderstone town illustrating Hunderstone at present and the idea they have built up and attend in the future

Given is a map of Hunderstone town illustrating Hunderstone at present and the idea they have built up and attend in the future
The map provides information about
existing
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the existing
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 map and
future
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the future
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 plan in Hunderstone city.
Overall
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, there are some
development
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developments
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 in several utilities at the northside, southside, and ring
road
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at
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on
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 the eastern side.
To begin
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 with, Hunderstone nowadays have an
Air field
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airfield
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 at the north site, connected with
A2
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the A2
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road
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.
Railway
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The railway
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located
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is located
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 in the
centre
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, and
Town
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the Town
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centre
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located
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is located
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 at the
east
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east,
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 surrounded by
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a build-up
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build-up
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built-up
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area
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 ring
road
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.
Lastly
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, the city has
central
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a central
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 gas station in the middle
area
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, near a railway. The development plan
depict
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depicts
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 a construction A4
road
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 from
south-west
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the south-west
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area
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 to
Town
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the Town
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centre
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, and
this
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road
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 will connect with
A2
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the A2
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road
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.
In addition
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,
previous
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the previous
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air field
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airfield
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area
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 became
industrial
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an industrial
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estates
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estate
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 and will
connect
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be connected
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 to
railway
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the railway
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.
Furthermore
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, a major ring-
road
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 development will appear
at
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on
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west
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the west
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 side of
Town
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the Town
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centre
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 and will connect to other cities.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, centre, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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