You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, - Explain why you changed jobs. - Describe your new job. - Tell him / her your other news.

Hello Gurpreet, I hope you are doing

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well

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in your professional life. I remember that

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apply

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I told you 2 months later that

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apply

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I am looking for a new job related to a 3rd year apprentice mechanic. I got an offer letter from Mercedes-Benz,

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which

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is located in Kitchener (Ontario).

Moreover

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, I had a fantastic experience with the general manager in that organisation.

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, I planned to join that company as soon as possible. I told you in my previous job, the shop foreman's behaviour was not polite with me. He

also

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does faber rism to his own community apprentices and gives me less chance to do different jobs , and per the discussion, during my hiring at Guelph Toyota. But the rest of the staff were so polite and gentle with me. On the coming long weekend, I am planning to visit your house , and please do not tell

this

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good news to your mom. I will tell her in person with sweets. I am thinking of visiting Toronto Island and doing some water sports with you and your family. I will

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call Simar if she is free

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we can all go together and make some decent memories. Hoping to hear a positive response from you. Your lovingly, Manpreet Singh

jotprabhsingh1315

Oct 11, 2025

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structure

Break the letter into clear parts: why you changed job; about the new job; other news. Start a new paragraph for each part.

grammar

Use short, clear sentences. Check the tense and time lines.

vocabulary

Fix misspells and wrong words. Use simple, real words.

tone

Keep a friendly tone and end with a simple goodbye.

content

You tell the reader about your new job and where it is.

tone

You plan to meet and to share happy news.

tone

The letter has a warm, kind voice.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

212 words

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