The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration provides details in regard to different stages of
ethanol
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production
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, as a fuel, through both natural and industrial processes.
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,
Ethanol
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is a green product that has by far the least environmental impact,
due to
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its circular process of
production
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. The
production
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process relies on plants as a resource , so
at the first stage
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, the grown trees and plants are harvested and sent to a factory in order to go through the pre-processing phase , and the result will be the cellulose.
At
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the following, in the processing phase, the chemical substances are added to the cellulose, which leads to
synthesis
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the synthesis
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and
making
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production of
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sugars. At the final stage of
production
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, particular microbes are added to the sugars
and
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Ethanol
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is released. The consumption stage
is involved
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with
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apply
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burning
ethanol
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as
bio-fuel
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biofuel
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by aeroplanes, trucks, and
cars
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cars,
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that
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which
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in turn
result
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results
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in carbon emissions.
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emitted carbon dioxide will be placed in
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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as its ingradient gases and next will be captured by trees and plants in order to grow.
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circular process will occur continuously.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, production with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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