The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams illustrate the process involved in the production of
chocolate
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To
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produce
chocolate
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, you need to go through 10 stages
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most notable aspect is that the transformation requires both thermal and mechanical energy at multiple stages The process of
chocolate
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production begins with the cultivation of cocoa trees, which bear ripe fruits. The fruits are
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harvested, and the white cocoa
beans
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are extracted from them. After that, the
beans
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undergo fermentation, which is crucial for developing their
flavor
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. The
beans
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are
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sun-dried before being packed into large bags for storage and transportation. These bags of cocoa
beans
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are sent to the next stage of
chocolate
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production. After transportation, the
grains
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are delivered to the factory, as shown in the picture with the factory and the machine.
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the
grains
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and a thermometer are shown — at
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, the
grains
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are roasted.
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the
grains
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are crushed, removing their outer shell, as can be seen by the hands removing the husks. In the final stage, the inside of the
grains
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is pressed, after which liquid
chocolate
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is produced.

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task
Give one clear overall idea of the process at the start, then list the main steps in order.
coherence
Use simple link words to show order, like First, Next, After that, Finally.
grammar
Fix spell and form: use 'beans' not 'grains', check commas and full stops.
organization
Use a small plan: intro, 3-4 short steps, and a short end. Keep one idea in each line.
structure
The work shows a simple order of steps.
cohesion
It uses order words like Next and In the final stage.
content
The idea of energy use in steps is noted.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrations
  • process
  • harvested
  • fermented
  • develop
  • flavor
  • dried
  • moisture
  • roasted
  • enhances
  • outer shell
  • cracked
  • inner nibs
  • ground
  • liquid
  • pressed
  • separate
  • products
  • dark chocolate
  • milk chocolate
  • tempered
  • molded
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