The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.

The pie chart

ilustrates

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illustrates

the

persentage

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percentage

of popular takeaway

restorants

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restaurants

such

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as Indian, Chinese, Italian, Japanese, Greek, Mexican and others in Canada between 1960 to 2015 Generally, the majority of the

orderes

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orders

were from two

kitches

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kitchens

the

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, the

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Indian and

chinese

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Chinese

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While

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apply

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the Mexican, Japanese and

thai

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Thai

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were the lowest. And

presian

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and other places stayed average.

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with,

chinese

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Chinese

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food accounted for the largest percentage by 34% of the popular kitchens. Next to it, the Indian restaurant

which

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is showing

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a close

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relative number by 26%.

On the other hand

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, Persian, Italian or

shopes

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shops

never order them recorded an average

figures

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figure

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of 9

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%, 10% and 11%

respictuvely

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respectively

In comparison, the Greek, Mexican and Japanese food shops made up the minority by 1% for all of them.

Additiomally

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Additionally

, the Thai and

other

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others

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showed similar distribution by 3% and 4% respectively

dr.wessam_jamal

Oct 15, 2025

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4
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

138 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

charts
favourite takeaways
people in Canada
number of Indian restaurants
1960
2015
types of takeaways
popular
55 years
country
time frame

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The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.

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