The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

✍️ Want to check your own essay?Start now →
Three features provide precise data about the Little Chifont Library's members' age group, their popular book categories, and loan numbers in a nine-year period.
Overall
Linking Words
, the loanship grew accounted around 25% in the investigated time, around half of the members were
adults
Use synonyms
and in regard to
scheme
Correct article usage
the scheme
show examples
, fiction was the most in favour
one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
. In 2007, the number of 15500
books
Use synonyms
were rented which through a fluctuating-rising scheme stood at 22000 rentals in 2016, and during
this
Linking Words
time, a bit more than half of the members were
adults
Use synonyms
(51%), the second place belonged to
children
Use synonyms
with 22%, and teenagers and the elderly occupied the next two stages with 15% and 12%, respectively. Turning to book categories, fiction
books
Use synonyms
, both for
adults
Use synonyms
and
children
Use synonyms
, were the most interesting scheme , each of which had 38% popularity. After them, non-fiction
books
Use synonyms
for
adults
Use synonyms
with 13%, and for
children
Use synonyms
with 6% were attractive.
Also
Linking Words
, there were some categories with little audiences,
for instance
Linking Words
, adult
audio
Use the right word
audiobooks
show examples
books
Use synonyms
, young
adults
Use synonyms
and
children
Use synonyms
's DVDs with 2%, 2%, and 1% respectively.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, books, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overall
  • in general
  • the most
  • the least
  • higher
  • lower
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • drop
  • share
  • number
  • rate
  • group
  • age
  • men
  • women
  • books
  • children
  • adult
  • more than
  • less than
  • about the same
  • compared with
  • while
  • whereas
  • accounted for
  • made up
  • remained stable
What to do next:
Look at other essays: