You recently had something delivered to your home. You now realise the person who delivered it damaged something in your home while they were delivering the item.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my concern regarding a recent

delivery

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made to my home on October 10th, 2025. The

delivery

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was for a washing machine that I had ordered from HomeTech Appliances, and it was handled by your company. Unfortunately,

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the

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staff were carrying the washing machine into my apartment, they accidentally damaged my wooden door frame. There is now a noticeable crack and several scratches on the surface, which were not there before the

delivery

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. I took photographs of the damage immediately after the incident as evidence. I would appreciate it if you could arrange for compensation to cover the cost of repairing the damaged door frame, or alternatively, send someone from your company to assess and fix it. I believe

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situation can be resolved quickly and fairly. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully,

acaitaz

Oct 15, 2025

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Add exact facts like the order number and the date, and the cost to fix the door. This helps the reader act fast.

structure

Break long lines. Use short sentences so the reader can see the need quickly.

tone

Keep a calm, polite tone and use the order and incident steps in the right order.

purpose

Clear goal stated and action asked for.

evidence

Notes evidence with photos.

tone

Polite and formal tone.

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

146 words

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