The current maps compare the current layout of an industrial area in Norbiton city and the future proposal modifications.

The current maps compare the current layout of an industrial area in Norbiton city and the future proposal modifications.
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The current maps compare the current layout of an industrial area in Norbiton city and the future proposal modifications.
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, several modifications are planned, the most
noticiable
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noticeable
eight factories were dismantled from the territory,
also
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was observed various facilities were added
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such
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as shops, a medical centre and
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a playground
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "compare" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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