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The table below shows the number of full-time students from India ho studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.

The table below shows the number of full-time students from India ho studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.
The table gives information
of
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the numbers
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numbers
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number
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 of Indian students
spent
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who spent
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 full-time studies at six
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universities in the UK from 2020 to 2022.
Overall
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,universities like Coventry
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university
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University
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,Sheffield
University
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 and the
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university
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University
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 of Leicester have dramatically increased
over
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by over
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 100% .
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,
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other was less than 100
percent
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per cent
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 of the rise
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such
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, such
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 as
(
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The
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university
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University
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 of Greenwich ,BPP
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university
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University
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 and Anglia Ruskin
)
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. Regarding
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the table , Sheffield
University
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 has the highest
persantage
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percentage
 of number of students that
claimed
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reaching
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to
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187.7% by 2022 . Followed by Coventry
University
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 and The
University
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 of Leicester
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,
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reaching 121.3% and 103.4% respectively .
On the other hand
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 , Universities
such
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 as 
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BPP
Univiersity
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University
)
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has
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have
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 dropped to
lowest
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the lowest
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 percentage with 46.8% in
year
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the year
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 2022 ,
other
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others
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 like
The
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the University
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university
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 of Greenwich reach less
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then
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than
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 100%
withe
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with
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 84.9% .
Also
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 ( Anglia Ruskin
University
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 ) rise change with 69.6% .

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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