Work is being done on the street where you live . The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter. -Introduce yourself -Explain what the problem -Suggest solutions to the problem

Dear
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, The purpose of writing
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letter today is to inform you about the serious
noise
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pollution
occuring
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occurring
in my
localities
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. First of all , my name is Harshidh Panicker and
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been over a decade
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since
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I
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a chairman and a resident of Mangalmurti society.
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with , a week ago , the road construction was in progress .
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, the
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from
drilling
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the drilling
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machine and other
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equipment
are
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is
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unbearable
and
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to make
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things worse, the
worker
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workers
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continue to work till midnight , which not only
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disturbs
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the sleep of all the
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residents
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but
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create
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noise
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disturbance to the
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environment
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,there is a school on
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the right
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side of my colony , where
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children
are not able to focus on their
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because of
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noise
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the noise
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and
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it is
adversly
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adversely
affecting their study too. I would like to insist
you
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that if you could allocate a time to the labour to work at
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time
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then
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it would be greatly helpful for both society and
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the school
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. I would suggest you
to
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procced
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proceed
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working from 3
pm
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to 10
pm
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because the
schools
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ends at 3
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and after 10
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people usually go
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a
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sleep. Your cooperation in
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manner would be highly appreciated.
Furthermore
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, any open line of
communciation
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communication
in
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matter would be greatly helpful. Your sincerely, Harshidh Panicker

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structure
Break the letter into clear blocks: a first paragraph to say who you are, a second to state the problem, a third to give a fix, and a final to say thanks.
grammar
Check spell and fix small errors: its/it's, localities, occuring, envrionment, adversly, communciation.
tone
Use more formal tone. Start with 'Dear Sir,' and end with 'Yours sincerely,' and sign your name.
content
Be exact with times and actions. Suggest a realistic start and end time and what the council should do.
writing style
Keep one idea in one sentence where you can and use short, simple lines to help the reader.
content
You tell the problem and you give a clear fix.
content
You show care for the people in the school near you.
tone
You ask for action and show respect to the council.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Local council
  • Disturbance
  • Resident
  • Noise pollution
  • Disruption
  • Work-from-home
  • Well-being
  • Adequate notice
  • Inconvenience
  • Noise control measures
  • Temporary relocation
  • Work schedule
  • Prompt attention
  • Amicable resolution
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