Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Most people usually face a difficult decision in their professional lives

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should they choose a safe

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or one that brings

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? Some believe that it is more important to have a stable and secure

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, as it provides financial safety and

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risks. Others,

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, think that enjoying one’s work leads to higher levels of happiness.

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essay will discuss both perspectives and present a personal opinion. On the one hand, a permanent

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does not involve unpredictable difficulties. For people who are not risk-takers or value comfort,

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is clearly a good option.

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, for those with financial responsibilities,

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kind of

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is often a necessity.

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positions can become monotonous, leaving people tired and unmotivated. In many cases, they

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offer low wages and little recognition.

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, choosing a

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that brings pleasure can provide career prestige, motivation, and long-term personal

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, which can

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enhance happiness in one’s personal life. Even though

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satisfaction

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does not guarantee a high salary or stability, it can make individuals feel more fulfilled and enthusiastic about their work. In my opinion, it is important to find a balance: to choose a

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that motivates you to wake up every morning, but

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to be aware of the potential risks and prepare to avoid unemployment. Especially nowadays,

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security cannot be taken for granted. In conclusion, stable jobs are usually associated with low incomes and

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of motivation,

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jobs that bring

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can be risky but may lead to higher levels of happiness both professionally and personally, which

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view

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is worth pursuing.

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Oct 20, 2025

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Clear view of both sides and the writer’s own view.

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Good use of 'On the one hand' and 'On the other hand' to show contrast.

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Introduction and conclusion are present and clear.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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