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The line graph shows house price between 1977 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows house price between 1977 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates
house
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price
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prices
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 for three different countries from 1997 to 2014.
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,
average
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the average
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house
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price
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 increased in all countries;
moreover
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,
Country
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 A experienced the highest change in terms of
house
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price
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 in the given period. In
Country
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 A,
average
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the average
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house
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price
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 increased minimally from 1997 to 2000
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. In
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in addition
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 to
this
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 rise, it rocketed to just over 500k
dollars
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 between 2000 and 2003.
However
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, prices decreased slowly to just under half
million
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a million
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dollars
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 in the following three years. After 2006, it grew moderately from almost 500k
dollars
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 to nearly
650
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650k
k
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dollars
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 until 2009.
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,
house
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price
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 remained unchanged from 2009 to 2014 in
Conutry
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Country
 A. Average
House
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 prices in
Country
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 B and C grew from nearly 125k
dollars
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 and reached almost 200k
dollars
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 and 350k
dollars
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, respectively
between
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, between
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 1997 and 2004.
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, it soared from just over 250k
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 to just under 500k
dollars
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 between 2008 and 2010 in
Country
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 B. After the sharp decline between 2007 and 2008,
house
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price
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prices
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 had increased dramatically to above 250k
dollars
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 in the following years in
Country
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 C.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words house, price, country, k, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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