The charts below show employment rates of males and females of different ages and the average age of their youngest child in the UK in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The shown bar graph illustrates the number of men and women employees of a variety of ages and the average age of workers’ youngest child in England in 2008. Let’s look at the chart

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, the rate of males accounts for a higher number,

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the opposite is true in females, who had a lower rate, but

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in younger age groups, females witnessed a more impressive number than males As is shown by the graph, in diagram 1, the figure of male staff members in group of ages 26-34 to 50-59 were the highest, and 16-22 and 60+ reached 20% and 26%, respectively.

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women only explain from 20 per cent to78%. In diagram 2, men workers only gain about 60-70

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, and lower than the amount of women,

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the highest being between the age groups 6-10 and 16-20

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more employment than men.