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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts information about the total
of
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number of
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 their citizens based on three different
period
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periods
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 of time, which are in 2003 and
future-estimation
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future projections
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 in 2025 and 2050, in four different countries,
such
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 as Argentina, Indonesia, Italy and
Republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea.
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, it is evident that
the
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only
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country
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one country
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 from Southeast Asia has the highest prediction of population throughout the year.
This
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 was followed
with
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by
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 Argentina, which
is
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has
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also
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 climbed steadily.
Hoewever
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However
, the
country
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 from South America has trended downwards by the year
of
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apply
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2050, whilst
Republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea has a
rise
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rising
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 trend
first,
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then
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 remained stable in the upcoming year.
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 with, Indonesia
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, as
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as
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with
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 the highest population among other countries, started at 238
million
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 in 2003. Rose sharply in 2025
at
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to
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 274
million
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 and 312
million
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 in 2050.
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 was accompanied
with
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by
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 the same trend
with
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as
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 Argentina,
started
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which started
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 at 34
million
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 in 2003. Climbed steadily in 2025 at 48 and reached its peak in 2050 at 62
million
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.
Conversely
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, one of the
Europian
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European
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country
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countries
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, Italy, started at 54
million
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,
then
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 experienced a
trended
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trend
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 downwards in 2025 at 47
million
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 and in 205 at 45
millions
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million
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.
While
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,
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apply
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 the other Asia
country
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, which is
Republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea, started at 48
million
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 in 2003,
then
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 jumped to 52
in
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million in
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 2005 and held steady in 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words country, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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