The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.

The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.
The bar chart shows spending on watching
movie
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movies
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outside, eating out, and going to concerts in France. The unit is
euros
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, and the figures
divided
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are divided
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by
age
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.
Overall
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, older
people
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mostly paid for eating out,
while
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the young
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young
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younger
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generation preferred to
buying
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buy
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concert tickets. Expenditure for
movie
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movies
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was the
last
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in every given
age
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groups
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group
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The biggest spending among the
age
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groups
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was on having
meal
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a meal
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out
in
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among
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40 to
55 years old
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55-year-old
people
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, which is slightly over 20
million
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of
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apply
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euros
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. Compared to other
age
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groups
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, the youngest group
costed
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spent
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the least money on going to dining in.
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, the 18-
25 years old
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25-year-old
group paid a little below 15
million
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euros
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for enjoying music performances, which tended to decline
when
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as
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people
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get
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apply
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aged. The highest amount of money for purchasing movie tickets is in the group with 26 to 39 years old
people
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with between 10
million
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to 15
million
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euros
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,
whereas
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other
groups
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bought around 10
million
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euros
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or less than that.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words euros, age, people, groups, million with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • spend
  • spent
  • spend on
  • money
  • euros
  • millions
  • bar chart
  • category
  • activity
  • age group
  • Paris
  • France
  • 2019
  • paraphrase
  • overview
  • pattern
  • trend
  • highest
  • lowest
  • more
  • less
  • increase
  • decrease
  • rise
  • fall
  • grow
  • drop
  • compare
  • difference
  • cinema
  • restaurant
  • music concert
  • amount
  • total
  • average
  • on the one hand
  • on the other hand
  • overall
  • in general
  • shows
  • indicates
  • reveals
  • however
  • therefore
  • and
  • but
  • also
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