The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
recyling
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recycling
process of
glass
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across the six stages.
Overall
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, it's
clealry
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clearly
seen that
,
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apply
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this
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diagram begins with
collection
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the collection
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of
glass
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bottles in a recycling bin and finishes
via
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with
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transportation
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the transportation
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of
new
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newly
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produced
glasses
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to the supermarket.
Firstly
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, waste
of
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apply
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glass
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materials
collecting
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are collected
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in
a
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apply
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special
recycle
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recycling
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bins,
then
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some kind of garbage collection truck picks
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this
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up this
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waste material and
delivered
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delivers
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to
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it to
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treatment
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a treatment
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center
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centre
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for
further
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processing.
Thirdly
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,
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this
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these
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waste
glasses
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washed
Verb problem
are washed
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in a kind of washing machine for sanitation and
sterilization
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sterilisation
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,
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.
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After that,
cleaned
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the cleaned
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and
steirilized
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sterilised
glasses
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conveyed
Verb problem
are conveyed
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to crushers and ovens for
crushing
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the crushing
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and melting phase
,
Punctuation problem
. Then
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then
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then,
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this
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the
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hot melted
glass
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core
reshaped
Verb problem
is reshaped
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via
glass
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moulding
maching
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machine
. and get fine
glass
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bootle
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bottle
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shape again.
At the end
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of the process, all new
glasses
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are transported for
selling
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sale
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in supermarkets.
To sum up
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,
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glass
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the glass
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recyling
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recycling
process continues
untill
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until
the material is treated as
totaly
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totally
useless
,
Punctuation problem
apply
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.
so
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So
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glass
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recyling
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recycling
is
continue
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continuous
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in
a
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an
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enless
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endless
loop.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, glasses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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