The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart below illustrates the average
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alteration in the amount of money spent on three metals: Zinc, Copper, and Nickel. over a one-year period.
Overall
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, it is evident that the Zinc’s price changed
while
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displaying an upward trend.
In contrast
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, the Nickles’ average of the money spent dropped significantly.
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, the copper remained relatively stable. The Nickel change in price decreased substantially. With 6%
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at the beginning of the period , to exactly -3% in June.
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, the trend increased gradually until it reached -1% , and it remained consistent for 3 months in a row. The Zinc’s proportion experienced some fluctuations throughout the period. In February, it was 3% it reduced substantially to -1% in June. For nearly a quarter of the year, it stayed unchanged with around -0.5%.
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, the copper’s percentage fell to almost twice as less , from 2% to just over -1%. Eventually, its proportion returned to its starting point just below 2% by the end of the date.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "substantially" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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