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Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early i n school, while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Some individuals believe that students should
taught
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international
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an international
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language
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early
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an early
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in
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age in
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 school,
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 others think it should
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be taught
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 later.I believe
children
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 can easily obtain
language
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 in early
class
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classes
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. Many individuals argue that students have to learn
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language
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a language
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at
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in
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 early
class
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classes
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 because
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the youngs
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youngs
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young
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 brain
fresher
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is fresher
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 and
easy catches
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easier to catch
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 any information.They don't have any limits or fear
to
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of
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 new information. Learning
languages
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 should be structured and
well prepared
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well-prepared
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.With
right
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the right
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 technique and
smart
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a smart
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teacher
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teacher,
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children
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 can easily handle
new
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a new
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language
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.
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,many
children
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raising
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raised
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billingual
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bilingual
 families can easily learn more than 2
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 and be very fluent. Another research indicates that pupils who
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languages
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from in
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in
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an
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 early
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languages
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age
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 will be more flexible
to
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compared to
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 in comparison with others who
do
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are
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 not.
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other
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others
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 believe learning
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in
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apply
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early can
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also be problematic
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also
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.
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The majority
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children
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of children
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 suffer from broken
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 skills
due to
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the confusing
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confusing
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confusion
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languages
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 they learn.
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 number of
children
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 who speak late
increasing
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is increasing
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drammaticly
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dramatically
to mixing
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as they mix
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 2 or three
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language
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 they now.
Main
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The main
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 reasons are to have difficulties forming sentences. International Health
Organizations
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declare
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recently, a great number
kids
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of kids
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 who started to learn more than 2
languages
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 together suffer from oral speaking difficulties
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it is
cause
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causes
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emotionally
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emotional
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 and
psychologically
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psychological
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.
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issues.
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summery
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summary
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learning
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, learning
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languages
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 can bring a lot of benefits,
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 learning
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a very
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very early
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language very early
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language
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 can be harmful too

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organization
Organize ideas into clear paragraphs with a topic sentence in each. Use a simple plan: show the issue, give both sides, then give your view and a short end.
structure
Make the thesis clear in the first sentence and clearly state your position.
grammar
Use simple grammar; check tense and form so the verbs stay the same in a sentence.
cohesion
Use linking words to connect ideas: first, also, however, in addition.
accuracy
Be careful with facts; if you mention an org, make sure it is correct or keep it general.
content
The essay shows an attempt to take a clear stance.
content
There are some good ideas about early language use and possible benefits.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • language
  • early
  • school
  • student
  • child
  • learn
  • learning
  • practice
  • exposure
  • memory
  • pronunciation
  • listening
  • speaking
  • reading
  • writing
  • speed
  • focus
  • home
  • teacher
  • class
  • method
  • materials
  • resources
  • pressure
  • interest
  • motivation
  • balance
  • later
  • basics
  • topic
  • opinion
  • conclusion
  • exposure
  • development
  • tool
  • resource
  • age
  • stage
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