The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004.

The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004.
The pie chart and bar one give a breakdown of the promotion of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004.
Overall
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, in the pie chart,
while
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most of the liquid was used by residents' houses, the lowest rate was selected for others. In general, in bar display, for gardening and bathroom were used the highest amount,
while
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the kitchen had the smallest figure. In the pie chart, there were six consumers of water, namely industry, government, business, residential houses and apartments and others. In
this
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consumption, the public houses were dominant at 57% and the second highest rate was by its apartments at 13%. Regarding business and industries had closely similar figures at 10% and 11%.
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, the lowest promotion was in other consumers at 3%, and the government had its doubled number at 6%. In the bar illustration, there were 5 types of residential usage of mineral liquids in Australia in 2004. The bathroom and garden had the same promotions at 27%.
In contrast
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, the smallest percentage was in the kitchen direction at 10%, which was half the washing clothes figure(20%).
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, for WC , expectedly gone 15% of water consumption

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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