The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates one country’s profits from different types of exports between 2015 and 2016. Meanwhile, the table compares
export
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earnings in each category in both years.
Overall
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, all the types of exports did not change significantly during
this
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period. At the start, all the categories can be separated into two groups. The first group contains petroleum products, engineered goods, textiles and agriculture, whose
export
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earnings had increased by 2016.
Furthermore
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, the only type of
export
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in the second group was jewellery and gems , with slightly decreased income (5.18%).
Additionally
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, the chart shows that the most profitable industries were
petrol
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the petrol
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industry and engineering, with approximately 60 billion dollars of
export
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income.
On the other hand
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, the least beneficial ones were textiles and agriculture , with nearly 28 billion dollars for both.
Secondly
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, each category’s
earning
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earnings
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, except one, did not change by more than 8.5%. In
this
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case, only
textiles’
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the textiles’
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export
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profit in 2016 became 15.24% higher than in 2015.
In contrast
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,
petrol
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the petrol
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industry, engineering, jewellery and agriculture changed only by 3%, 8.5%, 5.18%, and 0.81%, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words export with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • trend analysis
  • anomalies
  • percentage change
  • sector analysis
  • global demand
  • domestic production
  • economic conditions
  • technological advancements
  • international regulations
  • economic growth
  • trade relations
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