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The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for the Foreign Language Learning in 2020. Summarise the charts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for the Foreign Language Learning in 2020. Summarise the charts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided table chart provides information about the chosen
language
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 to learn in 2020 from native English
speakers
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 in the UK facility for foreign
language
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.
Overall
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, Mandarin is the most widely spoken
language
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 by native residents in
UK
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the UK
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, followed by Spanish and Arabic.
However
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, languages like Japanese and Welsh are not commonly learned there. Looking at the figures in more detail, it is evident that Mandarin is commonly spoken in the UK , with 27% of its
learners
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 being
women
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,
whereas
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 14% are
men
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. Turning to Spanish with 19% of its
speakers
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 are
women
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, compared to 19% who are
men
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. French and Arabic have an identical proportion of
women
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speakers
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;
nevertheless
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, Arabic
learners
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 outnumbered French in male
speakers
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.
On the other hand
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, Italian accounted for only 3% of
women
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speakers
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,
while
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 another 5% are
men
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learners
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.
Similarly
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 to the Welsh
language
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with
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, with
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 only 4%
women
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speakers
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, whilst 8% are
men
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learners
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. Japanese and German
women
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speakers
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 are similar, where both of them account for 11% and 7% respectively;
nonetheless
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, Japanese male
speakers
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 reached 10%,
where
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whereas
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 Germany is above that with 14%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words language, speakers, learners, women, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breakdown
  • native English speakers
  • UK Centre for Foreign Language Learning
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • most popular
  • significance
  • notable trends
  • reflected in
  • traditional preferences
  • least popular
  • perceived difficulty
  • potential implications
  • geographical proximity
  • cultural ties
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