You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour. In your letter • Explain the problem • Suggest a solution • Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

Dear Neighbour, I am writing to you today to address a problem that has been causing me tremendous problems.
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I have been unable to speak with you in person, I would like to bring your attention towards the problem now. The main issue is the noise from your property in the night around 9:30 A. M.
This
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has made it hard for me to sleep and relax.
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,
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I understand that everyone has the right to enjoy at their home
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their choices,
but
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I would like to request that
please
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decrease the noise level after 10:00 P.M. It would be considered a simple solution if you slow down the music level. I am hoping you will resolve the issue. If the situation does not improve, I will have to consider other actions
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talk to the building manager or contact
to
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the local authority about a noise
complain
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. I hope we can work
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out together. Thank you for understanding. Yours
Sincerely
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, Rupinder Kaur.

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grammar
The time is wrong in the line about night. Use after 10 PM, not 9:30 AM, or say 'late at night'.
structure
Try to put one clear idea in each paragraph: 1) problem, 2) a clear solution, 3) what you will do if it does not change.
content
Be exact about what you will do next, like who you will talk to and when.
grammar
Check how you close the letter and the spelling of Your visit 'Yours sincerely' is correct.
tone
Polite tone and clear request.
content
The letter shows what you want to happen.
structure
Opening and closing lines fit a letter format.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • dear
  • neighbor
  • noise
  • problem
  • night
  • sleep
  • day
  • please
  • thank you
  • sorry
  • understand
  • talk
  • meet
  • note
  • message
  • plan
  • solution
  • quiet
  • loud
  • time
  • hour
  • watch
  • TV
  • music
  • headphones
  • door
  • carpet
  • rug
  • floor
  • wall
  • building
  • manager
  • council
  • contact
  • agree
  • good
  • kind
  • calm
  • respect
  • communication
  • arrange
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