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The diagram illustrates a fire evacuation plan for a college accommodation building. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.The diagram illustrates a fire evacuation plan for a college accommodation building. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram illustrates a fire evacuation plan for a college accommodation building. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.The diagram illustrates a fire evacuation plan for a college accommodation building. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The picture below describes an exit plan in a college
accomodation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
.
Linking Words
Overall
Punctuation problem
Overall,
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 it has two meeting points
in
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on
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North
Correct article usage
the North
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 and West
side
Fix the agreement mistake
sides
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 of the building
which
Punctuation problem
, which
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attached
Verb problem
are attached
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with
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to
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stairs
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the stairs
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. It
clearly
Verb problem
is clearly
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 seen that there
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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 seven bedrooms,a big corridor,
lift
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a lift
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 and stairs.In the middle of
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the ares
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ares
Correct your spelling
area
 is located a large hall,
also
Linking Words
first
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 exit was on the west side
and
Punctuation problem
, and
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second
Correct article usage
the second
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 entrance was on
north
Correct article usage
the north
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part
Punctuation problem
part,
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 located behind the elevator.
First
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 and second bedrooms are located in
a
Correct article usage
the
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 western part
which
Punctuation problem
, which
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 is beside the
first
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 meeting zone,
whereas
Linking Words
 the third room was structured on
southwest
Correct article usage
the southwest
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 edge,which
opposite
Verb problem
is opposite
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 to
first
Use synonyms
 assembly point.To continue the fourth and fives placed on
north
Correct article usage
the north
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and
Punctuation problem
, and
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 they are
more
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apply
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closer
on
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to
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second
Correct article usage
the second
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 fire exit.The sixth and seventh
hall
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halls
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 of residences
based
Verb problem
are based
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 on
southern
Correct article usage
the southern
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 side
and
Punctuation problem
, and
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 in case of emergency,heading north is more convenient for them.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words first with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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