The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the count of
cars
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produced in three territories from 2003 to 2009.
Overall
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, Australia and
Thailand
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produced
much
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many
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more
cars
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from
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than
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Argentina
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by
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over
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the years.
Initially
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,
Argantina
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Argentina
was the most produced country for the given chart.
Unfortunately
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it lost
his
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its
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leadership between 2003 and 2005. Throughout
the
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all time
periods
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periods,
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Argentina
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decreased steeply. With these
overtooks
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overtook
Argentina
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was
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became
third
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the third
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most popular country in 2009 with produced 100
cars
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.
While
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the
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Argentina
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dipped,
Thailand
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rose sharply from 2003 to 2009. In 2003,
Thailand
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had
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produced 161
cars
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which
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, which
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is below
the
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Australia and
Argentina
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. After that,
In
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in
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2005
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2005,
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Thailand
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became one of the most produced
country
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countries
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. Between 2005 and
2009
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2009,
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Australia produced 719
number of
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apply
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cars
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and took the first rank with 1119 produced
cars
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in 2009.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, thailand, argentina with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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