The bar chart shows the percentage of small , medium, large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016.

The bar chart shows the percentage of small , medium, large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows the percentage of small , medium, large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016.
The given
bart
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bar
chart illustrates the proportion of small, medium and large companies which used social
media
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for business reasons throughout the period of 2012 to 2016.
Overall
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, large
association
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used social
media
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in their business more than the other two categories during the entire period,
while
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the chart demonstrated that the percentage varied from one year to another across all categories. In detail, during the period between 2012 and 2014, the presence of social
media
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climbed in
meduim
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medium
companies from 32%
to
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in 2012 to nearly 50% in 2014. the same case for social
media
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intervension
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intervention
in small
buisness
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businesses
which
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, which
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slighlty
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slightly
increased from approximately 28% to 35%
while
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the proportion in large
association
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associations
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remained stable at 78%.
However
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, in 2015, the percentage of social
media
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intervention decreased with different proportions in all categories , before a remarkable
rose
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in
2016
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2016,
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where it was 80% for large companies,55% for
meduim buisness
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medium business
, and a bit under 50% in startups.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words media with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital landscape
  • Market competition
  • Customer engagement strategies
  • Adoption rate
  • Comparative growth
  • Fluctuations
  • Entities
  • Proportions
  • Embracing
  • Predicts
  • Trends
  • Uptake rates
  • Substantial
  • Decline
  • Interpretations
  • Engagement
  • Noticeable
  • Implications
  • Consistently
  • Summarizing
  • Reflecting
  • Implications
  • Predicting
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