You stayed in a hotel and was not satisfied with service. Write a letter to manager. - why you chose this hotel - what problems did you face - tell the manager what to do

Dear manager, I am writing to complain about the poor service. I booked

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hotel because my friend suggested

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apply

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apply

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that

she

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stayed

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there before , and it was a wonderful place.

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,I booked

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this

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two weeks in advance and prepaid at the booking.com.when I arrived, they told me it was fully about the room I booked before.

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,they gave the new room , which was

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a bit

smaller and had no windows.

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,the room was not clean and comfortable.There was a smell in the place because it had no windows I could not get the fresh air from outside.

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bed was a bit soft

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hard to sleep.I am very disappointed with

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hotel.

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experience was unacceptable,and I would like to inform your manager to manage and fix the service. I hope you will fix

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matter quickly , and I am looking forward to receiving a full refund. Yours sincerely JJ

kyp.atthajariya

Nov 17, 2025

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grammar

Fix grammar and spelling to make meaning clear.

structure

Put each main idea in its own paragraph and use a clear order: intro, list of problems, end with a request.

tone/content

Be more polite and precise. Add dates or stay period, and state how you want the issue fixed (money back, refund, apology).

content

You give a reason to pick the hotel.

structure

You tell the problems in the room.

tone

You ask for a full refund in the end.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

153 words

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