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The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below gives information about the consumption of
fruit
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that is
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 recommended by the UK population for daily routine.
Overall
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,
while
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 the
fruit
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 consumerism had a low percentage between the years 2002 and 2010,
however
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, in 2006 had the highest rate of consumerism. In 2002, at the first point, the male
gender
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 consumed 22 fruits for a 23 per cent rate, and for the female
gender
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, the percentage was equal to 25.
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, the
last
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gender
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 about children had the lowest percentage between the two genders, and it was 11%. Four years later at first the Men
gender
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 had a 26% proportion, and the female
gender
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 had the highest rate of consuming the
fruit
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 and at 32%. In 2010 , there were a lot of changes rather to other years. From the first
gender
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 had a high level chart 24%, in the second
gender
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 , the women had a significant increase in the consumption of
fruit
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 and at 26%. At the final , the children's
gender
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 had declined to 16%

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fruit, gender with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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