The table shows the percentage of households with electronic goods in New Zealand in 1998 and 2002.

The table shows the percentage of households with electronic goods in New Zealand in 1998 and 2002.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table shows the percentage of households with electronic goods in New Zealand in 1998 and 2002.
The table chart illustrates the number of households that own electronic devices in the country
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Zealand in the years 1998 and 2002.
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it is clear that
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in the year
2020
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most
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the
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individuals used more technological items than in the year 2002.
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, it is noticeable that the washing machine and colored TV had the highest sales in both years. At the beginning of the period 2002, digital cameras were not very favored by many and that resulted in them 2%, as for dishwasher, the digit increased to reach 45,
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it was the same for video recorder, it rose to 45%, but unfortunately that was not the case for cell phones and computers because both of them decreased to 20 and 50 respectively.
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, in 2020 we can see that laptops and mobiles were bought by
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of the people,
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, video
recorder
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and glasswashers were not owned that much. And as for
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the camera
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camera
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again it had the lowest ratio with 40%

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