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You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say: – Describe what you left and where it happened. – Why are these papers important? – What would you like the manager to do about it?

Dear
sir
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Sir
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,
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Iam
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I am
 writing
this
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 letter to request you regarding
my
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apply
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some important
documents
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 which
i
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I
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forget
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forgot
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 in your taxi.
you
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You
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 remember , yesterday
i
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I
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 booked your left around 7.30 pm from
dixi
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Dixi
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 interaction to
sandalwood
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Sandalwood
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. I had a blue file in my hand when
i
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I
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sit
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sat
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 in your car. Actually , yesterday
i
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I
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 came from my work and
i
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I
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 was
little
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a little
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dispressed
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depressed
that's
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, that's
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 why
may be
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maybe
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i
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I
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 left my document .
our
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Our
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 company have organised a big project and
iam
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 leading that project .
This
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friday
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Friday
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 we have
presentation
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a presentation
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 for
project
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the project
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 with
dealers
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dealers,
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 so
,
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apply
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i
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I
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 need
that
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those
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documents
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 urgently to prepare for
presentation
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the presentation
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 .
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otherwise
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Otherwise
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, my boss will fire me from
job
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my job
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which
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, which
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 will destroy my whole
carrer
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career
.
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Iam
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I am
 requesting
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,
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could you please check your taxi back seat and take
that
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those
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documents
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 .
i
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I
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 would
be
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apply
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come to bring
that
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those
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documents
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 from your address.
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Iam
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I
 appreciate
for
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your help.
iam
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 looking forward to your reply. your faithfully.

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grammar
Use proper capitals and mark like I, Java no, fix many small caps and punctuation.
structure
Break the text into small parts. One part for what you left, one for why it is important, one for what you want the taxi man to do.
tone
Be polite and stay formal. Do not say you will lose your job in anger; say 'I would be grateful if you could help me' and 'please'.
content
Give exact detail, like where you left it and when, in simple words that the reader can see.
content
You tell why the papers are needed for a project and a meeting.
intent
You ask the driver to check and to keep the papers safe.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • document(s)
  • identifiable
  • urgent
  • significant
  • crucial
  • approximately
  • vehicle
  • manager
  • trip records
  • lost and found
  • taxi driver
  • contact
  • inform
  • update
  • locate
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