In Britain, when someone gets old, they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In the United Kingdom, it is thought by some that

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older individuals live together in

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one house with nurses who take care of them, and the authorities should pay all expenses.

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essay believes that the government have to take that responsibility

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their relatives, because the old individuals may not have family or they are very poor. The authorities should take care of the

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elderly

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persons

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and provide everything they need.

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means that the government prepare

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for them for free, because they have to look after all citizens during their whole life.

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the policymakers collect

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from

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must

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on services that help the public,

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as

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healthcare facilities, education and houses for the old people.

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, in many developed countries, there

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prepare

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for

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older

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persons

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, which include medical care, healthy food, and activities. One of the reasons that the state

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to provide

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places

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is

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elderly may

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have any family members.

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, end up being homeless because they don't have any family members who can pay the money.

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, another reason

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many older people have

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or daughter

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they are very poor, and if they must spend part of their salary on older homes, that will

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affordable for them.

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, in my country, most

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older

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who live in

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type

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of

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and

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the government supports

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they

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do not have any relatives or

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have very low incomes. In conclusion,

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essay believes that the payment for the

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houses

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of elderly

persons

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is the

authorities

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authorities'

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responsibility, because they may

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have

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offspring

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or they may have children who can

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offer that payment.