The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.

The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
The data presents the consumption of
meat
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, salt and
fish
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by China's citizens from 1985 to 2010.
Overall
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, the
fish
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is the dominating food category out of the three mentioned during the whole timeline, but salt and
meat
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have big changes during the period , which led to the same amount of consumption
at the end
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. Focusing on
meat
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and salt, the former in 1985 had 100 grams eaten per week, but it rose to 200g in 2010.
However
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, the latter started in 1985 with around 490 grams consumed weekly, but
through
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over
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the
period
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period,
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it had a huge decrease to 200g in 2010, staying at the same amount as
meat
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. As for the
fish
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, it started at the 600g mark, already being consumed more than the other groups. Following an increase to even 700g,it recovered to 600g in 1995. The amount of
fish
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eaten started to rise again after 1995 , having a constant increase during the 15-year period, in 2010 , having 850g of it consumed by Chinese people.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, fish, g with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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