The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female teachers in six different categories of educational settings in the United Kingdom in the year 2010.
Overall
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, it was visible that
women
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are considerably more than men's proportion at
Nursery
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the Nursery
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and Primary school.
On the other hand
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, men have a well overproportion in
university
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the university
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category compared to
women
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.
Furthermore
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, the proportion of men is slightly over than
women
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in the Private training institute. In
conrast
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contrast
, the same thing is true for
women
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in the Secondary school category.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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