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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Nowadays, staff wearing a
uniform
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 at the workplace during the job is a must in many
companies
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.
Thisthis
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This
 can come with some disadvantages because employees will be limited to a specific type of clothing and they might not be able to
wash
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 their
uniform
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 every day,
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 there are more advantages ,
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, recognising the staff and asking for services. some times
companies
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 usually restaurants give their worker a
uniform
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 to wear during the work time,
this
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 can be looked as a disadvantages from the employees aspect, because of wearing a specific type of cloth in a daily basis can become a burden,
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 they will need to
wash
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 the
uniform
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 every day, there will be days where they forgot to
wash
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 their
uniform
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,
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 they will wear the
uniform
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 which are not clean,
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 some indian traffic officer wear the same pair cloths
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 the short time they dont have time to
wash
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 the cloths because they have to wear the same cloths the next day. From another perspective , wearing
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uniform
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a uniform
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 is useful and helpful for the user services and the
companies
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 for many reasons.
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it will be easier to spot the waiter and other workers ; there won't be any misconceptions.
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, it helps with the identity of the company.
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, many
restaurant
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restaurants
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 have uniforms to match their identity, like McDonald's, and many other fast food restaurants. In conclusion, many businesses have uniformity for their employees, which sometimes can be
disadvantage
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a disadvantage
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, still there are way more advantages for both
companies
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 and customers.

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structure
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coherence
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grammar
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content
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task response
The essay tries to discuss both sides of the issue.
content
There is a basic idea of how uniforms help a firm’s look and brand.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • uniforms
  • staff
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • promotes
  • belonging
  • team spirit
  • professional
  • cohesive
  • image
  • security
  • identification
  • reduces
  • expenses
  • employees
  • decide
  • wear
  • fosters
  • equality
  • minimizes
  • differences
  • individuality
  • self-expression
  • uncomfortable
  • restrictive
  • body types
  • sizes
  • maintenance
  • cleanliness
  • control
  • restriction
  • personal style
  • fashion preferences
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