Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities.In order to get ideas from the public,they have asked library users to send themsuggestions in writing.
Write a letter to the librarian.In your letter
· describe what you like about the library
· say what you don't like
· make suggestions for improvements

Dear

sir

Fix capitalization

Sir

show examples

: I am a ten-year user of your

library

Use synonyms

and

Punctuation problem

, and

show examples

I am so happy to hear the news that the

library

Use synonyms

will

do

Verb problem

make

show examples

some improvements to meet the

demand

Fix the agreement mistake

demands

show examples

of all users. I am writing to you to share my feelings about the

library

Use synonyms

and

Punctuation problem

, and

show examples

I wish you could take some suggestions made

by

Change preposition

apply

show examples

me

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

into consideration

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

the improvements. First of all, I am very

appreciated

Replace the word

appreciative

show examples

of the service provided by the

library

Use synonyms

and the

stuff

Use the right word

staff

show examples

, especially

on

Change preposition

for

show examples

the service

of

Change preposition

to

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

children. You provide a

children-friendly

Replace the word

child-friendly

show examples

environment

and

Punctuation problem

, and

show examples

parents can take their children to the

library

Use synonyms

to enjoy reading all

kind

Fix the agreement mistake

kinds

show examples

of books suitable

to

Change preposition

for

show examples

them during the summer vacation, which is a great

convenient

Replace the word

convenience

show examples

to the parents, safe and reliable.

However

Linking Words

, there are still something need to be improved or replaced.

For example

Linking Words

, the facilities

such

Linking Words

as the desks and the chairs are in poor condition that they may

have

Verb problem

pose

show examples

potential

Correct article usage

a potential

show examples

safety risk to the users. Another problem

should

Correct pronoun usage

that should

show examples

be taken into consideration is the lift, which may be out of the warranty period.

Everytime

Use the right word

Every time

show examples

I use the lift, I can feel the shaking of the lift, making me feel unsafety. Thank you all the time for your service to the users

and

Punctuation problem

, and

show examples

I

wish

Verb problem

hope

show examples

my suggestions will be one of your improvements. Yours sincerely, Steve