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The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.

The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.
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 the population of the turtle species,
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 as Leatherback, Green turtles, all species , and Olive Ridley in India from 1980 to 2012.
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, a remarkable decrease was observed, except for Leatherback Turtles. In the preliminary stage, the amount of population was the same for all types,
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 in the ultimate period, that indication was the highest for Leatherback, and the lowest amount was experienced for Olive Ridley.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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