The chart show requests for information at a tourist office in the United kingdom from january to june

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illustrates
the trend of the number of
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lodged at the tourist
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in
United
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Kingdom from
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to
June
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by various methods, namely: in person, by letter/email and by telephone.
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, we can see that the number of
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enquiries
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have
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sharply increased from
January
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to
June
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.
Requests
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received by telephone
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were
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the highest in the first three
months
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of our observation period
but
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becomes
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a second preference by the
vistors
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visitors
between April to
June
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.
Enquiries
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by letter/email
surpasses
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in-person
enquiries
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in
January
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and February but sharply
declines
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as the least preferred from March onwards. The tourist
office
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registers a little above 400 in-person
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in
January
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which
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gradually increases in the next two
months
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to about 600 and 800
enquiries
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respectively. After which, it sees a sharp increase to slightly more than 1200 in the month of April and reaches approximately
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1900 by the end of the observation period. In
January
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, the
office
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registered the highest
enquiries
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by telephone, accounting
to
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about 900. It dipped in the following month to about 800, post which it remained consistent at 1000
requests
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for the next two consecutive
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. In May and
June
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, even though the
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increased to about 1400 and 1600
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respectively
respecively
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respecively,
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it remained lower than in-person
request
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requests
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filed by the
office
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.
Enquiries
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by letter/email
was
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the only
menas
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means
which saw a steady decline over the
months
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with
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, with
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a little less than 800
requests
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in
January
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compared to approximately 400 in
June
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.

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