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Fewer and fewer people today write by band hand using a pen, pencil, or brush. What are the reasons? It is a positive or a negative development?

Writing implements have become a concerning trend. Nowadays, using a pen, pencil, or brush has decreased. There are several reasons why
this
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 is happening.
This
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 phenomenon has pros and cons, but
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 essay will contend that on balance, the advantages of using different
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outweigh the negatives. First of all, given the technological advancements, using
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method
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methods
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 like
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 are
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, and individuals prefer to use smart
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 like typing with their laptop, tablet, phone, and other gadgets, because digital
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methods
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 are speedy and
time saving
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.
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, in
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 of privacy, they are safer and more convenient to save.
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, if you type an essay
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 your computer,
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you have
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 to the file of
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 nobody
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 read
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 As far as I am concerned,
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 the use of writing tools like pens and pencils has significantly helped the environment in a positive way, which is highly advantageous.
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 instance, we don't need to
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 trees in order to prepare writing implements.
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, it is
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, to be more precise, we don't need to buy pens or pencils, and we can use alternative
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, like digital
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,
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that
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is
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 very popular all over the world. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea. In my opinion, admittedly, the policy has produced some positive outcomes, yet
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 remain about its long-term effectiveness.

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development
Make each idea clear and give simple, real examples.
grammar
Fix big grammar errors and use plain, common words.
coherence
Put one idea in each paragraph and use easy links to join ideas.
structure
The essay shows a clear stance.
content
It puts ideas like tech use and eco effects.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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