The graph below gives information about the common activities children of different ages in the United States do as part of their bedtime routines.

The bar chart illustrates the portion of some ubiquitous
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nighttime
activities that
children
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aged 1-8
years
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take part in on a daily basis. It can be witnessed that the most popular
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that all of the 3 groups of
children
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attend every night is reading
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eating is the least one. On the one hand, the
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that can be regarded as the most dominant one done by
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a group
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of 1-3-year-old
children
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is reading.
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percentage is at
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65%.
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,
this
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group of
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barely watch TV when they go to bed at night
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the figure shows that
this
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activity
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constitutes about 15%.
On the other hand
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, 4-5-year-old and 6-8-year-old
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mostly read in nighttime routines. Reading accounts for 70% in 4-5
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and nearly 60% in 6-8
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.
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, eating is the least done
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by
this
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age group. The data for eating in 4-5
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is 10% and in 6-8
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is
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10%, which
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is
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lower than the peak
activity
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by 50%.

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