The graph below gives information about the common activities children of different ages in the United States do as part of their bedtime routines

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
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in the United States who engage in five different nighttime routines, divided into three age brackets.
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, reading is by far the most prevalent activity for young Americans before bed,
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watching TV and eating are the least
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. In comparison, dental hygiene and bathing occupy a moderate position in terms of participation. In detail, 70% of those aged 4-5 enjoyed bedtime stories, a slightly higher share than those aged 1-3 (around 65%) and 6-8 (about 58%).
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, only about one-fifth of the youngest group eat before bed, and fewer than 10% of
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in the two older age groups do so. The rate of
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viewing television
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shows a similar pattern, remaining at and below 20% in all age groups. Turning to hygiene-related
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, half of the oldest group brushed their teeth before going to sleep, compared with around 45% of the 4-5 group and 30% of the youngest cohort.
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pattern implies that dental hygiene becomes more consistent as
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grow older. Having a bath before sleep was
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a relatively common practice, accounting for roughly one-third to two-fifths of youngsters.

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