The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the percentages of older

people

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in 5 different countries in 1985 and

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apply

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predictions in 2035.

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elderly

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the elderly

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populations

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population

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experienced an upward trend

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50 years from 1985 to 2035.

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with, Wales had more than 15 per

cent

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older

people

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, the highest among other nations. England and the UK share

the

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similar proportion with approximately 15 per

cent

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, Northern Ireland had the lowest

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percentage

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people

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aged 65 and above, with less than 13 per

cent

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. In 2035,

estimation

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the estimation

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aging

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ageing

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people

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in England, Northern Ireland, and the UK will have

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a similar

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value

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they will have 23 per

cent

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older

people

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Although

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Scotland's projection will achieve 25 per

cent

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at the end

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of the period, Wales will gain 26 per

cent

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, the highest proportion of

aging

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ageing

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people

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Dec 13, 2025

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Ageing population
Demographics
Percentage
Increase/Decrease
Predictions
Proportion
Region/Regional
Statistics
Gradual change
Elderly
Life expectancy
Healthcare
Birth rate
Comparative analysis
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The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.

Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. However, some say that individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In Some Countries An Increasing Number Of People Are Suffering From Health Problems As A Result Of Eating Too Much Fast Food.

Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to a child’s development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?